criticism of the tone is appreciated….
Very-tough to critique the tone 'cause there's massive phase cancellation across-the-board brother.
^^This for the tone.
I just leaned my phone against something and hit record…lol…very in depth recording process….
Brilliant but may I suggest a change to, “look on in ugh…”? The more vomit references the better!
Man after my own heart….
Man after my own heart
I’m only running three choruses….I don't know man, I think if you saw a guy lying on the floor in the middle of the night, with projectile vomit shooting out of his mouth towards the Moon, you just might find yourself "in awe" as well.
"in ugh" is more in line with when you hear the amount of modulation effects JackBootedThug insists on using with his high gain tone.
I was thinking of that line from a first person perspective. Bent over the toilet, seeing your own reflection in the water just before launching a torrent of vomit accompanied by the “ugh” sound. At any rate, it was a distinct pleasure collaborating with you on our shared passion of fine poetic prose.I don't know man, I think if you saw a guy lying on the floor in the middle of the night, with projectile vomit shooting out of his mouth towards the Moon, you just might find yourself "in awe" as well.
"in ugh... ?" is more in line with when you hear the amount of modulation effects JackBootedThug insists on using with his high gain tone.