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[codyjarret]

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[Meathead]

Sound quality aside and if I can be honest...

I hear some nice writing and chord changes, but I'd like to hear more memorable melodies over-top in your lead playing, instead of just speed riffing most of the time.
Maybe it's just me, but I prefer a guitar instrumental to be more memorable with nice melodic playing and speed riffing only where it fits in. Otherwise, you're just blowing your load everywhere...all the time.
Take your time, treat the song right...make love to it. Don't wham bam thank you song it.

 

[Meathead]

Sound quality aside and if I can be honest...

I hear some nice writing and chord changes, but I'd like to hear more memorable melodies over-top in your lead playing, instead of just speed riffing most of the time.
Maybe it's just me, but I prefer a guitar instrumental to be more memorable with nice melodic playing and speed riffing only where it fits in. Otherwise, you're just blowing your load everywhere...all the time.
Take your time, treat the song right...make love to it. Don't wham bam thank you song it.

I totally hear what you're saying Bro, I appreciate the feedback and your thoughts.

I don't mind constructive criticism, I'm a very open minded person.

Cool, it wasn't meant to be an insult.
Speed players are a dime a dozen, just go on you tube. Great melodies sink in better for the listener. It makes you want to listen to the song again and again.

 

[supersonic]

I listened to the whole thing. It is a jumbled bombardment of notes. There is some nice playing amongst it all and I really like the tone. The instruments do not gel together, it is not tight. If you cut 80% of the notes played I would like it more. Nothing in there memorable that I can hum along to later.

 

[MountAnDewMe]

I like the lead and the rhythm but they are not helping each other and for some reason they sound disjointed. Kind of forced together. I get the idea of where you are going with it and it could sound real good but I would suggest some tweaks to the way the parts are interacting together because the song isn't breathing right.

 

[Badronald]

Like the others have said, you have some skills but there's too much of everything. There's a lot going on but it doesn't flow from one section to the other.
These comments aren't meant to discourage, but be constructive.

Thanks for posting up your vid.