Chick writes freaking awesome riff!

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I saw this on Youtube and man....that chick is aWESOME and it's a great riff and song :D

 
The verse is really good as is the riff the Chorus does not grab me and the vocals are weakest there .
Its a solid idea and arrangement chorus needs work IMO
 
Well, I thought it was pretty cool. If I heard it on the radio I wouldn't switch the station.
 
I made it to 1:06 and that was because of your over the top sell. Her vocals are horrible, lyrics cliche and guitar average. If it was a guy this post wouldn't exist. Nice guitars though.
 
bigdaddyd":3zvcsebv said:
I made it to 1:06 and that was because of your over the top sell. Her vocals are horrible, lyrics cliche and guitar average. If it was a guy this post wouldn't exist. Nice guitars though.


:lol: :LOL: :lol: :LOL: :lol: :LOL:

I don't know. The opening riff was pretty cool. Take it to Nashville, let it get tweaked, sung by Faith Hill - It's a hit.
 
Shark Diver":9qx0evgj said:
bigdaddyd":9qx0evgj said:
I made it to 1:06 and that was because of your over the top sell. Her vocals are horrible, lyrics cliche and guitar average. If it was a guy this post wouldn't exist. Nice guitars though.


:lol: :LOL: :lol: :LOL: :lol: :LOL:

I don't know. The opening riff was pretty cool. Take it to Nashville, let it get tweaked, sung by Faith Hill - It's a hit.


Agreed get a different singer and change some of the corny lyrics ..get a big Chorus with half the state of texas singing on it and its a hit

and get some cowbell
 
I think its pretty cool. :thumbsup: It would be better if she was nude though or at least topless... ;)
 
For a French girl with English being her second language it's not bad. Put some more work into it and she may have something there. Like the SG.
 
She's French?? She sounded as if she was straight out of my neck of the woods. She's got the stereo type down to a T. Pegged me, she did.
 
I thought the song was pretty cool. If she took it to one more place in the chorus on the cowboys and beer part with a change in the melody and chords, it could go to the next level. It just seemed to bog down at that point. She should for sure be rockin a bikini.
 
gtr31":w2jtottr said:
Shark Diver":w2jtottr said:
bigdaddyd":w2jtottr said:
I made it to 1:06 and that was because of your over the top sell. Her vocals are horrible, lyrics cliche and guitar average. If it was a guy this post wouldn't exist. Nice guitars though.


:lol: :LOL: :lol: :LOL: :lol: :LOL:

I don't know. The opening riff was pretty cool. Take it to Nashville, let it get tweaked, sung by Faith Hill - It's a hit.


Agreed get a different singer and change some of the corny lyrics ..get a big Chorus with half the state of texas singing on it and its a hit

and get some cowbell

Yeah, add to the new singer and lyrics, a new band, new music and better production and you have a hit. Keep Faith Hill....and the guitars. The SG and Tele can stay.
 
cool voice...

however, the judge from Jersey gives this a big ole ZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzz

=)
 
She's doing WAY more than I am right now with respect to recording and video production, so I can't be too harsh. The song has a bit of a hook but I'm with the masses on this on--needs different production and arrangement and Nashville could turn it into a top 20 hit.
 
well, get a new riff, a new verse, a new bridge, a new chorus, different lyrics, different guitars, different wardrobe and different hair color and you really got something there... :lol: :LOL:

you guys are a tough room. ;)
 
I gotta admit, I can't get it outta my head. Not a bad thing.

Not even particularly fond of country these days.
 
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