I’ll give You an A+ for effort Bro, but I’ll be blatantly honest with You by giving You a harsh C-, & possibly even a less than pleasing/& not so solid D in regards to Your overall musicianship/& Your lack of attention to any/& practically ALL DETAILS smaller than anything blatantly obvious. I’ll explain My exact reasons for My Personal Grade/& My Personal Opinion After I just say this quick little statement because I want people to get the record straight that I’m not saying anything negative to be a douchebag, or put peoples hard work down into the dirt shattered into a million pieces, in fact it’s quite the opposite.
I choose to blatantly/& brutally honest to fellow musicians about ANYTHING/& EVERYTHING, but most of all I’m most brutally honest regarding someones weakness/mistakes/flaws/sloppy parts/& sloppy, & sometimes just plain shitty technique/& lack of attention to every single little detail no matter how big/or how small. I do this particularly because I want fellow musicians to be told the brutally honest truth at all times so that they can go back, & work on the mistakes that were made so that they can grow, & become the best possible musician that they could ever possibly be.
Work on locking in everything within the rhythm section (This Also Applies To Lead Guitar As Well, But Focus First On Getting The Rhythm Guitars/Bass Guitar/& Drums Locked Into The Groove Pocket As Tight As Humanly Possible For The Entire Song) this is seriously integral to a band sounding SOLID.
Work on Your playing precision on all four instruments. Make sure each note You play is correct, & make sure Your fingering is very precise on the fretboard to get the clearest/most in tune/& strong articulate note each note played, & ONCE AGAIN make sure You remain LOCKED IN TIGHT WITH THE DRUMS/& DRUM BEAT ESPECIALLY WITH THE BASS
JUST PAY ATTENTION TO EVERY SINGLE LITTLE DETAIL OF EVERY NOTE PLAYED ON EVERY INSTRUMENT DON’T EVER SETTLE FOR ANYTHING LESS THAN PERFECT, OR AT LEAST NOTHING SHORT OF YOUR ABSOLUTE BEST!!!!
Good job, keep trying, keep practicing, & keep getting better Brother I hope this helps You at least in some way even if it’s just a tiny bit. My videos are extremely old, & I do not play shitty like that anymore in case You ever see My page and watch the videos of the Pink Floyd Covers I did with a few friends when I first started playing bass 14-15 years ago when I was a Freshman at Dos Pueblos High School. Please trust that I DO KNOW WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT BECAUSE I DO TRUST, & BELIEVE ME ON THAT BROTHER!!!!! I could go into way WAY MORE DETAIL ABOUT EVERYTHING I’VE ALREADY MENTIONED ABOVE, & MUCH MORE WHICH WOULD MAKE THIS COMMENT THAT MUCH MORE UNBEARABLY LONG TO READ ALL OF THE WAY THROUGH SO I’LL JUST LEAVE IT AT WHAT I’VE STATED ABOVE!!!!!!!!!!
Take Care, & Good Luck Brother!!!!!!!!!!