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[codyjarret]

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[moronmountain]

I like the first one better, but the timing seems off a bit to me for some reason.

 

[ibenhad]

Sounds good man. Nice chops and I would like to hear the finished recordings.

 

[severinsteel]

Great chops man! Your timing does seem off though. A lot of your notes are a little bit late, or the timing just isn't there. I would work with a metronome as much as possible. Technique wise, you have really stellar chops, but I would buckle down and work on your rhythm; that's the first thing people will notice.

 

[supersonic]

Every clip you post I have the same response, great playing but crappy timing. You have a problem with your timing!

 

[codyjarret]

My apologies, I'll just post the finished product from now on.

 

[supersonic]

My apologies, I'll just post the finished product from now on.

It's not that it's a rough copy. It's like you're not listening to other instruments while your playing. If you can play tighter everything will sound better. Rough takes often have more mojo than a finished product.