So errrrl - I hate to even crit your stuff because it is so damn good. Seriously.
I hope you don't mind my little comments. You do seem very open to suggestions and I believe you appreciate the feedback. I could never do anything like what you do so it is mad props to you all the way around.
I did go ahead and listen using my phone and then through headphones+laptop and it sounded much more balanced. For reference:
Laptop- medium grade HP 360 2n1, not the greatest speakers. = Percussion was a little too much.
Laptop + Skullcandy over ear headphones = much better
Smartphone - Blackberry KeyONE, decent stereo speakers = much better, esp. given what it is. Actually, know that I think about it, my phone handled that clip very well given the amount of 'bass' frequencies.
But for reference, I usually listen to clips via the laptop's speaker so if I say something like 'Percussion was a bit much' that is just relative to other clips using the same medium.